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Collaboration page under: Collaborative Activity Revision #1 Home page - You might consider rearranging a little to put the welcome and purpose of the page at the top and then about you. Also remember, you are creating this page as if you are already a teacher in a classroom so you will want to write from a different point of view in your about me. When you include the widget like the one at the bottom you want to explain what it is and why it is there for students. You might evaluate if this is the page that widget belongs on. If it is, make sure you tie it in to the other information on the page. ........................................................................................................................ Photo source: [|author2author.blogspot.com]

Edited: 6/27/12 - Rearranged a little, put the podcast at the top of the page. Also, changed the point-of-view on the information about me. I also tied in the widget at the bottom of the page, and added a calendar.

Professional Development Plan - You have a good attainable short term goal but you didn't include specifics of what you would do. Revise and include what you will do to become comfortable with these programs and add a time frame. For example, you will spend an hour a week learning about Kidspiration through online tutorials and you will create at least one Kidspiration web. This is just an example and not exactly what you need to write but it should give you an idea. Edited: 6/27/12 - added a photo + url credits. Also added a time frame (weekly) onto my short term goal.

Wiki Rules - Good rules. You might consider adding a few sentences about how a wiki is a collaborative community and like all good communities you must have rules of behavior. Write it in kid and parent friendly words of course. Edited: 6/27/12 - added a sentence on why wiki rules are important.

Content Area Research - It is great that you cited your picture and linked it but you may also consider adding the actual URL of the site the picture was taken from. You can write something like Picture courtesy of: (linked URL) Edited: 6/27 - added a linked URL of the picture

I like that you created a parent page, it is a great way to share information with parents. You will want to go in and type a little more for each of the widgets introducing parents to the widget, what is for, how it will help them and their student, and how to use it. Overall good work. Be sure to proofread and address the concerns listed above. Edited: 6/27 - added a photo, pdf, and explained each widget in more detail.

Revision #2 Home - good

PD - good Rules - good but missing a picture 7/3/12 - added a photo + credits

Content Research - good

Projects - good, you might consider adding lines to section off projects and adding a title to each section just to make the page a little more visually clear 7/2/12 - Added lines to block off each section

Revisions - good but missing a picture 7/5/12 - added a picture + credit

Technology Reflections - You have the page but haven't typed anything yet. Be sure to reflect on each of the technologies we have learned. 7/5/12 - page completed

Other - Spanish - good but missing a picture, the ones that are there are part of the widget 7/5/12 - added a photo+ credits

Other - Parent Ideas - Good idea to include this information for parents, just reevaluate the design of how you are displaying the information. Adding a standard design to each tip will help the page be cohesive in the way it looks and easier for the viewer. 7/5/12 - Moved around some of the widgets and text.